Monday 26 October 2009

Alphabet Soup-Partner Feedback

We were split into small groups of 6 and paired up with someone in the group, with this person we reviewed two people work other than our own. We wrote down what we thought about there work on the feedback forms then fed back to each other in a small group discussion.

Strengths:
1)
  • Focused on idea raised at the start- childish at heart
  • Colourful
  • Playful font and layout
  • Looks like fridge magnets
2)
  • Focused on the theme of childhood from the questionnaire (spider diagram)
  • Colourful
  • Playful font/ layout
  • Good initial Ideas

Weaknesses:
1)
  • More use of media
  • Develop typeface more
  • Finish Product- fashion items added look a bit confusing and out of context
2)
  • More use of media
  • Not much evidence of ideas being explored
Actions:
1)
  • More initial ideas and experimentation/exploration of available out comes
  • Revert back to initial interview for relative ideas
2)
  • Explore initial ideas (e.g fashion/phone/ idea of mixed media)
  • Go back to the interview, add more of a theme to final piece

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